In Amy's literacy this week we critiqued our Energy explanations . There were 15 deeper features to critique our writing. Most of them are to do with structure. The lines on the very right are for how we do. The very start if the line is you didn't do it in your explanation. The middle is that you did it and the end is that you did it and did it well. For our follow up we had to critique another persons writing.
This week for Felicity's immersion we learnt about fair tests. A fair test is a expirement that you only change one thing. We are doing a fair test on plants. One is controled and one is the changed .
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